Revising

1. How Can You Use Examples

1.1 Giving Examples

• supporting evidence for their claims or arguments
• help to understand and remember unfamiliar or difficult concepts

1.2 Examples as the Main Information in a Sentence

• talk about other papers and methods
• describe a "domain word"
• classical examples

1.3 Examples as Additional Information

• give some short - examples for an concept or an atmosphere

2. Common Writing Errors and Their Corrections

2.1 Italics and Underlining

• Italics and Underlining are methods a writer can use to emphasize particular parts of a sentence, like the domain word.
• cannot use on the general part like your examples.

3. Punctuation Point

3.1 Italics and Underlining

• for the names of book titles, newspapers and magazines, and the name of movies, plays, television shows, radio programs, software, musical compositions, and work of art
• using italics to highlight the names of commercial products, which can help to remove confusion.
• using italics for words and phrases used as examples, or for words in other language.
• using italics or underlining for the names of spacecraft, aircraft, ships and trains.
• Do not use italics or underlining for the titles of legal documents, such as the constitution
• Do not italicize or underline the title of your own theses or research papers
• Do not use italics or underlining to highlight quotations, footnotes, or notes under figures and tables. (make your paper difficult to read)
• using italicize for Latin medical words and phrases
• using italics or underlining for the titles of articles, essays, or short published works

4. The Writing Process

4.1 Avoid trying to write everything at once

• Binge writing seldom produces high quality writing, and the process can be stressful and painful
• writing little but often allows you to get into the flow of writing quickly and regularly with less stress

5. Tips for Journal Submission

• prove your paper is connect to real-world, make it interesting. Otherwise will give the reader a solution to a problem that does not exist.
• make sure your paper prefer theoretical or application
• summarize the contribution of your paper: certain areas, comparable results, relation with previous research
• make your continuing research questions interesting to absorb subsequent researchers
• explain how your theory applies to real-world and its advantage.

6. reduce the using of inappropriate vocabulary

7. use more academic vocabulary